Okay, I am no doubt having an attack of self-worth following the big ol' Stephen Hawking scoop and will trip over my own intellectual feet shortly. But for now, flushed with success, I've just flamed David Axelrod.
Axelrod sent out an e-mail about how to respond the health reform critics that was so wordy, so disorganized, so unhelpful that I jumped into the contact section and typed:
Dear Mr. Axelrod,
I just received your email which starts "This is probably one of the longest emails I've ever sent," and it is, but that's not the problem.
Could the "myths" section of this email BE more disorganized? It's hard to imagine how. For goodness' sake, you're supposed to state the myth, then dispel it--not switch back and forth between the myth and the assurance. For crying out loud, I know this stuff is complicated but you're a communicator--take a few minutes and crystallize the message before you send it out there.
Or hire me for a couple of weeks and I'll help you with it. Sorry to flame you, but several of the regular posters on Josh Marshall's TPM Cafe could come up with better, more hard-hitting, more concise work than this. And I think a couple of them just lost their jobs, so maybe you should roll on over to Talking Points Memo, click on TPM Cafe, and ask for some help.
I post as erica, and I'm a decent writer but a mere shadow of some of the intellectual giants who post there.
Again, sorry for the flame, but if you are trying to help ordinary people get the message out, you need to do better than this.
Which leads to my question--should the great explainers and sloganeers of the Cafe be more overt and possibly function as a group in helping our gummint get the ideas out there? If somebody comes up with something so useful that most of us are in awe of its pithy greatness or fantabulous explainment properties, should we have a way to get it to the powers that be????
Open to your thoughts...
ps I couldn't find a link to Axelrod's email so the dreadful "myths" section appears below.
8 common myths about health insurance reform
Reform will stop "rationing" - not increase it: It's a myth that reform will mean a "government takeover" of health care or lead to "rationing." To the contrary, reform will forbid many forms of rationing that are currently being used by insurance companies.
We can't afford reform: It's the status quo we can't afford. It's a myth that reform will bust the budget. To the contrary, the President has identified ways to pay for the vast majority of the up-front costs by cutting waste, fraud, and abuse within existing government health programs; ending big subsidies to insurance companies; and increasing efficiency with such steps as coordinating care and streamlining paperwork. In the long term, reform can help bring down costs that will otherwise lead to a fiscal crisis.
Reform would encourage "euthanasia": It does not. It's a malicious myth that reform would encourage or even require euthanasia for seniors. For seniors who want to consult with their family and physicians about end-of life decisions, reform will help to cover these voluntary, private consultations for those who want help with these personal and difficult family decisions.
Vets' health care is safe and sound: It's a myth that health insurance reform will affect veterans' access to the care they get now. To the contrary, the President's budget significantly expands coverage under the VA, extending care to 500,000 more veterans who were previously excluded. The VA Healthcare system will continue to be available for all eligible veterans.
Reform will benefit small business - not burden it: It's a myth that health insurance reform will hurt small businesses. To the contrary, reform will ease the burdens on small businesses, provide tax credits to help them pay for employee coverage and help level the playing field with big firms who pay much less to cover their employees on average.
Your Medicare is safe, and stronger with reform: It's myth that Health Insurance Reform would be financed by cutting Medicare benefits. To the contrary, reform will improve the long-term financial health of Medicare, ensure better coordination, eliminate waste and unnecessary subsidies to insurance companies, and help to close the Medicare "doughnut" hole to make prescription drugs more affordable for seniors.
You can keep your own insurance: It's myth that reform will force you out of your current insurance plan or force you to change doctors. To the contrary, reform will expand your choices, not eliminate them.
No, government will not do anything with your bank account: It is an absurd myth that government will be in charge of your bank accounts. Health insurance reform will simplify administration, making it easier and more convenient for you to pay bills in a method that you choose. Just like paying a phone bill or a utility bill, you can pay by traditional check, or by a direct electronic payment. And forms will be standardized so they will be easier to understand. The choice is up to you - and the same rules of privacy will apply as they do for all other electronic payments that people make.
Learn more and get details:
http://www.WhiteHouse.gov/realitycheck
http://www.WhiteHouse.gov/realitycheck/faq