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Obama's Circumlocution
Obama's response to his opponents' attacks would be more effective if he spoke directly to the point. He has not yet learned to answer attacks with effective sound bites.
On Reverend Wright, he should simply have stated, "I respect Reverend Wright as a man of God, but I disagree with much of what Reverend Wright says. I believe in America."
On Clinton's race baiting, he should simply state, "No one American voter is worth any more or less than any other American voter. I value every demographic, every person in this country."
On McCain's absurd statements about Hamas, "Hamas is a terrorist organization. I oppose recognition of any terrorist organization. Hamas will not be pleased with my administration."
A fellow law student at Harvard commented that as President of the Harvard Law Review, Obama could dwell on a point at great length, to the frustration of those around him, before getting around to a conclusion, and a decision. Hopefully he will be able to sharpen his rhetoric over the next few months. These "controversies" about his views and associations grow quickly because he does not answer attacks quickly and effectively enough - here he could learn a few lessons from the Clintons.








Comments (25)
I agree somewhat, but a lot of Obama's appeal to me is his inclination to thoroughly explain complex issues.
The balancing act is tricky.
May 10, 2008 7:16 PM | Reply | Permalink
I can agree with this to some extent. However, the one thing to remember is that Obama is a quick learner. The real main issue with Obama is that his heart is in the right place. That is the bedrock foundation upon which his character rests. I'd much rather have that base, because everything else can be improved upon from there. I reference his debate performances. Initially he struggled. However, over time there was great improvement. I would actually say he won the latter three debates prior to being ambushed in PA at the ABC debate.
Some politicians/lawyers glibly have all the answers, but their foundation is shaky. Obama is that rare breed of renegade politician who demonstrates profound character. That is a cardinal virtue, compared to zippy one-liners.
And as I indicated, I am confident that those will come.
Finally, to wrap things up, I have to say I thought he gave the absolute BEST response to that PA ambush-debate by simply dusting dirt off his shoulders.
That was a demonstration of priceless brilliance, charm and wit.
May 10, 2008 7:35 PM | Reply | Permalink
And an image is worth a thousand words.
May 11, 2008 2:12 AM | Reply | Permalink
I have found Obama to be a quick learner, too. I didn't vote for him in the primary in NY, but he's run a pretty good campaign and he impressed me with the way he made a flipflop on Rev. Wright and denounced him after saying he could "no sooner denounce" him than he could his grandma.
Anyone who is a politician has to know how to flipflop. It's part of the game. It's part of staying alive, and viable as a candidate/politician.
If he's learned anything during the primary, he's learned from the best of them (Clintons) how to flipflop, how to answer a question indirectly, and how to lunge when going in for the kill. His style is sharper, more focused, too.
I suggested here a week ago that he's quite a guy, and that he's becoming presidential material. And that he, too, will learn how to turn $4 million into $109 million post-presidency.
If he makes it.
And who knows, maybe Michelle will run in 2016. Can you all see it?
May 10, 2008 8:27 PM | Reply | Permalink
-"Can you all see that?"
-No!
(And I don't know what point you are trying to make here, but it seems like you want to -not so sublty- equal the Clintons to the Obama. The thing is: you're off the mark.)
May 11, 2008 9:22 AM | Reply | Permalink
No, no, no, you're wrong about that. Its insulting to claim he's learned anything from the Clintons. Long before this primary battle with Hillary he had all the skills he needed.
Just look at the questionnaire for the Independent Voters of Illinois Independent Precinct Organization. When he needed to change his positions he simply claimed a campaign aide had incorrectly characterized his views on those issues when filling out the form. It was brilliant and would have worked too, if only he hadn't added notes to the questionnaire when he filled it out.
Like the any Chicago politician navigating through the patronage of the south side Obama learned from the best and his skills predate this primary season. Don't insult him by claiming he learned it from Clinton.
May 11, 2008 1:27 PM | Reply | Permalink
The NYT piece today on Obama’s rise mentions a problem he had where he didn’t condemn Yassir Arafat on a campaign questionaire (page 6). AIPAC helped him draft an apology blaming it on an aid. Is that from the same survey you refer to (and the banning handguns reversal)?
http://www.nytimes.com/2008/05/11/us/politics/11chicago.html?hp=&adxnnl=1&adxnnlx=1210449878-vOvoJXUhZbK5cVCmk9NAkQ
at4r reading the NYT valentine, it seems to me that Obama’s hesitancy in directly addressing any issue is more a matter of not committing to a position. He is portrayed as “pragmatic,” as opposed to others who are triangulating. I don’t think they should be playing gotcha, but downplaying or whitewashing questions of his political past that are going to be resurrected will backfire (Wright is mentioned once in passing and Ayers was just a guy from the neighborhood). Obama is a consummate politician, which is good for the party. But I worry about the same scenario as the midterms and ending up with a status quo leadership.
May 11, 2008 3:34 PM | Reply | Permalink
I agree Obama generally seems to be a quick learner, and he seems to be a very skilled politician. It's just that the past few weeks have been worrisome. The Reverend Wright issue stuck around a long time, and it just seems there must have been some way for Obama to deal with it faster and more effectively. Same with this Hamas garbage, which is just more Republican smear tactics to try to associate Obama with radical muslim terrorists - can't this smear be dealt with, effectively, within one 24 hour news cycle, the way the Clintons learned how to deal with smears? Even the "bitter" comment could have been spun, quickly, it seems to me, to neutralize some of the damage.
I love Obama's careful, intellectual, thoughtful analysis of issues. It is such a pleasure to hear, for a (big) change, from a major politician. But there is a time for such analysis, and a time for rapid, terse, effective response to ugly Rovian smears. The man's got to do some fighting!
May 10, 2008 9:59 PM | Reply | Permalink
I concur. He does sometimes give the (squirm inducing) impression of equivocation. A number of the stupid, distracting 'character issues' that came up in and after Pennsylvania could have been settled with a single shot - but he didn't take it, at least not when he should have.
May 10, 2008 11:10 PM | Reply | Permalink
The same qualities which don't serve him well as a campaigner are what lead him to make good long term decisions.
May 11, 2008 1:30 AM | Reply | Permalink
If his qualities hadn't served him well as a campaigner he wouldn't be where he is today.
He wasn't the front runner back in the day when the Primaries started. He has NOT ONCE been behind in pledged delegates.
I have to think that he has handled every one of the campaign crisis effectively. The facts speak for themselves.
Some might think he needs to do it differently; but whatever it is he has done it has been effective.
May 11, 2008 9:29 AM | Reply | Permalink
I want to add that this theme resonates much like the situation in which the loser in the race attacks the front runner for not being able to "Close the Deal," yet every one seems to avoid asking her the question: "Senator Clinton, why is it that YOU can't close the deal?"
He is not being effective? Then I can't wait for the moment when he becomes effective. Looking forward to it. ;-)
May 11, 2008 9:37 AM | Reply | Permalink
I agree. I don't think that more succinct statements would neutralize controversies, but they would be more effective.
May 11, 2008 10:37 AM | Reply | Permalink
I see that you a man who appreciates colors as I do.
May 11, 2008 12:12 PM | Reply | Permalink
oh sorry, I left out a word.
May 11, 2008 12:15 PM | Reply | Permalink
Keep in mind, though, that he's currently fending off attacks from two sides. I think once Hillary's out of it, we're going to see a very different campaign emerge.
May 11, 2008 10:56 AM | Reply | Permalink
No, no, no, you're wrong about that. Its insulting to claim he's learned anything from the Clintons. Long before this primary battle with Hillary he had all the skills he needed.
Just look at the questionnaire for the Independent Voters of Illinois Independent Precinct Organization. When he needed to change his positions he simply claimed a campaign aide had incorrectly characterized his views on those issues when filling out the form. It was brilliant and would have worked too, if only he hadn't added notes to the questionnaire when he filled it out.
Like the any Chicago politician navigating through the patronage of the south side Obama learned from the best and his skills predate this primary season. Don't insult him by claiming he learned it from Clinton.
May 11, 2008 1:24 PM | Reply | Permalink
I agree with you.
Warning, meta rant after this point. For those who dislike such things, stop reading.
It's nice to see a few posts creeping up on the Recommend list that do not want to promote Obama as God and gush about how wonderful he is, but actually want to analyze him and his campaign.
There are creeping signs that even here political propaganda has a shelf life.
That gives me "hope," hope that this site can eventually be repopulated with members who don't proudly describe themselves "supporters" of any candidate, as if supporters of a pro-sports team. What ever happened to being embarassed to be a political operative? Now it's kewl to proclaim that you are one! Why do I even care what someone who admits as a "supporter" thinks? By doing that, they are announcing they are prejudiced and going to propagandize. What will I learn from that? Nothing I can't learn from a professional political operative much more quickly and better than than an amateur one.
I'd like a place to follow the election where most of the members don't think of themselves as fans of political personalities, and where they don't screech propaganda and emotions of hate of opponents like the political operatives with bullhorns at a protest, but think of themselves as voters hiring politicians for jobs which they pay for with their taxes, and are looking for a place to analyze that situation with others.
If we must make it all about sport, can we at least have more coaches analyzing plays and the talents and vulnerabilities of the atheletes, fewer fans painting their face with team colors and screaming cheers.
I will close my comment with a quote from the user page of one member who has been scarce lately and whose comments I used to enjoy:
http://tpmcafe.talkingpointsmemo.com/profile/Mister%20Foo
May 11, 2008 2:08 PM | Reply | Permalink
I generally agree. But, if professional political operatives are better than amateur ones, why aren't professional analysts better than amateur analysts? Why bother to read amateur opinion at all?
I like my opinion a little raw these days. Most of the professional stuff is too cooked for me. And, with the exception of Carville, who is getting to be himself as this campaign draws to a close, I'm leaning toward the less cooked operatives, too. It's the ignorant ones I can't stand. I'm sure we'll have to put up with them until November, ranting at McCain and high-fiving every time they think one of them has scored a point.
May 11, 2008 3:11 PM | Reply | Permalink
Exactly, Carville is much more interesting and insightful when he gets cutting and cranky. He's gotten too co-opted by the talk show circuit but occasionally his Hunter Thompson roots show through.
May 11, 2008 6:21 PM | Reply | Permalink
Obama spoke for thirty-seven minutes about Wright, and it did not quell the doubts. In fact it raised more. He later readdressed the issue more forcefully and more directly, disassociating himself from Wright, and that didn't work either because he was contradicting his earlier speech, plus his association with Wright is to strong to be disavowed. He said so himself in his first speech. So he's only left with trying to disassociate himself from some of what Wright believes, and that isn't satisfactory.
Don't make the mistake of thinking that any concerns about Obama's attitudes on the subject of race were planted by his enemies, and can be quelled by a quick, firm response from Obama. You may not believe it, but he himself has created many of those concerns.
Unfortunately for Obama and the Democrats there are certain to be more revelations that will cast doubt on who exactly Obama is. If he plays the race game in trying to silence those doubts he risks alienating more voters. He dare not, as too many of his supporters do, paint as racists those people who have legitimate doubts about him. He is going to have to find a way to respect people's views and address them. It's going to be very tricky. I hope he succeeds, because we can't have McCain. But I'm very worried, and not just because of the racial aspect. His candidacy has a number of vulnerabilities.
May 11, 2008 2:14 PM | Reply | Permalink
One of my fears has been that in the general election the Republicans are going to make Obama defend his existence in ways the Clinton campaign has avoided doing.
I'm struck by the anecdote about Obama's laboring to make decisions as a law student. If that's bait, it is skillfully done. Who knows?
For sure they will be going after his performance in school, the people he competed with for positions and honors, almost anything they can find that lets them characterize him as the affirmative action candidate who hasn't earned what he got.
Unless he changes his position on a number of key issues, he's not going to change any minds.
Hard to see how any Republican, particularly John McCain, beats him, though.
May 11, 2008 2:50 PM | Reply | Permalink
I appreciate Obama's willingness to give a full answer to serious questions. It shows that he assumes Americans are ready to be treated like reasonable, intelligent, responsible citizens.
What I think he needs to get better at is deciphering the difference between substantive questions and the kinds of questions that are designed to create controversy, and to be able to quickly reframe a potentially controversial question into a more substantive question - with minimal words.
I would also like to see Obama (and his surrogates) directly challenge questions that start with false premises even before attempting to answer them.
For example, today Wolf Blitzer replayed the part of his interview with Mitt Romney where Romney makes the (false) statement that Obama "hasn't done anything" - "no significant legislation..."
Why did Obama allow that false premise to go unchallenged? It makes it seem like Obama is conceding the point.
Right off the bat, Obama should have challenged Romney's statement as untrue: "First of all, Wolf, I *have* authored and co-sponsored substantive bipartisan legislation both at the state and federal level, so Romney's assertion to the contrary is, on its face, patently false."
Then I think the quip Obama did respond with is an effective parry (paraphrasing): "I remember Mitt said the same thing about John McCain during a Republican primary debate, and look at were we are today."
Obama's lack of experience is clearly going to be a repeating theme of the McCain strategy, and Obama HAS to come out strongly and smack it down now, before it gets so entrenched in the public's perception of him. Hopefully it's not too late.
In fact, Obama has gotten some impressive legislation passed for having served in a Republican-controlled state and federal government.
For example, in Illinois he was credited with
- a landmark state death penalty law, passed UNANINMOUSLY by the Republican-controlled state government
- substantive state ethics reform law
- expanding access to healthcare for the working poor
- setting up community-based health centers in underserved neighborhoods
- expanding the earned income tax credit for thousands of families
And on the federal level:
- the "toughest ethics reform legislation in the U.S. Senate since Watergate"
- The Coburn-Obama Government Transparency Act to stop the Bush administration from awarding no-bid contracts for post-Katrina reconstruction projects & to improve oversight of federal spending after Hurricane Katrina
- The Lugar-Obama Nuclear Non-proliferation and Conventional Weapons Threat Reduction Act, legislation to detect and stop the smuggling of weapons of mass destruction throughout the world
He has also sponsored other meaningful legislation still in progress:
- the Iran Sanctions Enabling Act, which supports divestment of state pension funds from Iran's oil and gas industry
- the Comprehensive Nuclear Threat Reduction Plan co-sponsored with Sen. Hagel (passed as part of the omnibus appropriations bill
He was also the first senator to speak out on avian flu, spearheading an effort to spend $25 million to prevent a pandemic
And he introduced a bill that would help underwrite health-care costs for automakers that produce fuel-efficient cars.
So, it is FACTUALLY INCORRECT to say that Obama hasn't done anything of legislative substance while he's served as an Illinois state representative or Senator in Congress.
May 11, 2008 2:53 PM | Reply | Permalink
Obama has earned a lot of respect because he doesn't respond in sound bites.
When I have looked at video clips of Obama with voters and with media interviewers, I try to focus on the expressions on the faces of those who are listening to Obama speak or answer questions. Mostly, those voters or media interviewers have facial expressions of alert attention.
Seems to me that folks appreciate being engaged in thoughtfulness that stretches the boundary of discourse beyond clever one-liners. In fact, I think Obama's style shows a lot of respect for the gravity of issues and for his listeners, and they come away feel a lot more self-respect and respect for him, too.
May 11, 2008 3:04 PM | Reply | Permalink
The Senator does speak senatorially--at least not as badly as Senator Kerry.
May 11, 2008 3:41 PM | Reply | Permalink
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