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I've been thinking about writing a new novel. What do you think of this synopsis?


A couple of power hungry, war mongers manage to manipulate the electoral system of the United States of America. Together with a bunch of arrogant, incompetent hangers-on, they use fraud and the Supreme Court to gain access to the Executive Branch.


The story would follow the antics of this monstrous group through their destruction of citizen's civil liberties, the corruption of the constitution and the ultimate destruction of a system of checks and balances which has worked for over two centuries.


With the help of a one-party rule in the House and Senate, they manage to take the country into a unilateral invasion of another sovereign nation. While using terror and threats to frighten the people of the nation, the quagmire deepens until the military of the once great nation is depleted and nearing the end of its ability to function.


As the end of their second term looms near, an upstart from the other party rises in popularity. A young, charismatic black Senator suddenly threatens all they have managed to accomplish. This man begins to give hope to the poor, the minorities and the downtrodden who have come to know their place in the country.


Hope is the anesthetic which weakens and eventually kills the germ of hatred, fear and terror they have used to control the citizenry for nearly 8 years. It's like sunlight finding its way into a sewer. Something MUST be done! Hope MUST die!


The “Evil One” who has been pretending to be Vice President while controlling the puppet-dolt who was installed as “President,” concocts a remedy for the increasing hope of the masses. His plan all along was to use a segment of the “Patriot Act” to declare martial law and stop the election so the monsters could hang on to power. But as their popularity has steadily fallen it has become more and more evident that drastic measures would be necessary.


The “Evil One,” (Let's call him Rich) has closed down all avenues of oversight in the faltering Congress. Through never-before-imagined levels of secrecy, Rich has conspired to create a vast network of mercenaries who will do his bidding without question.


The plan is foolproof. The young upstart MUST be assassinated!


Imagine, if you will, the anarchy which would follow such an event. With their hope destroyed, the masses of poor, black and despondent citizens might riot. And that would be the perfect scenario for “Rich” and his cohorts. His mercenary army, (Let's call them Blue Water) could suppress the crowds and bring quiet to the terrified citizenry.


Of course the election of 2008 would have to be “postponed” indefinitely. The “Evil One” and his puppet-dolt could hold power until order was restored.


What do you think of my novel? Would it sell? Is there time to write it before it becomes non-fiction?


Comments (13)

Yeah.

Better rent a room at Valdrons before you do.

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I think there's probably time to write it... depending on how fast you write.

But I don't think it'd sell. It just wouldn't be entertaining enough.

People are looking for the unanticipated and the surprising...

I like this very much....as fiction. Perhaps you should write it and spread it about all over the net so they won't dare do it. They will have to think of something else.

There is soooo much corruption.

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You are the student of PTSD so I put this question to you. Millions of Americans like me lived through the assassination of the President. Most of us would tell you that they remember where they were when they got the news. For me it was a staircase in a university building. The railing of the staircase was stone covered in plaster and painted with a heavy coat of enamel, making it always so cold to the touch that one learned not to contact it bare handed. On that day I stood midway up the flight, leaning over, my hand on the cold railing, listening to a friend tell me that Kennedy was dead. I can still remember how cold that railing felt that day.

So after the next assassination, will we discover a kind of national assassination PTSD? Will we all be transported in some way back in time to relive that tragedy? Will my hand feel cold again?

Perfect description! I'd like to use it if you don't mind.

Chuck, your novel would burn a hole to Beijing. Write it, have fun and don't look back.

I think I hear helicopters!

How have you been?


Wake me up when martial law is declared... yawn..

Nothing but progress going on over in Mesopotamia.

You'll be the first to know, Lt. Mesopotamia will explode again as soon as Al Sadr decides to fight again. He's on "Spring Break" until they're resupplied and well rested. Well rested.... That's something our troops can dream about but never feel until and unless their "Idiot In Chief" is replaced.

On the home front, how long do you think you rich people can keep this stock market afloat? I noticed you got your wish when the mortgage lenders were bailed out. But it's only temporary. At some point the plug they put into the dike will be eaten away by the drip, drip, drip of foreclosures and incompetent management.

Hang in there. It could be worse!

I'm tuned into tonight's debate just so I'm up to date on who's going to surrender first. Popcorn in hand.. just a load of empty promises from both sides.

Sarah Palin, will be McCain's VP. I have listened to her give a couple speeches, she is impressive!

Guess what Chuck-

Like usual, I was right.

See you in November!! Note the date on the post above this one.

These are the animals you align yourself with.

http://www.redstate.com/diaries/absentee/2008/aug/30/fowler-fouls-hurricane-is-gods-favor-to-dem/

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